Tag: constructive criticism
group name: constructivecrit
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March 18, 2008 07:14 PM EDT --
When I signed up for Gather, I knew I was joining an encouraging and supportive community of fellow writers, artists, and awesome people. When I signed up for Gather, I knew I wanted to contribute . . .
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April 19, 2006 05:59 PM EDT --
"A breaking story just in."
Smiling, mannequin-pretty, liquid blond
with a plastic serious-smile of relief.
A blessing it was to divert
from the stasis of the same old story,
one that . . .
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May 08, 2006 08:33 AM EDT --
You've put your all into a poem, essay, story, image, or novel. It is your child, a piece of you. It is a third or thirtieth draft, something you've really worked over, and now you are putting . . .
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April 10, 2007 10:17 PM EDT --
An original copyrighted work by Brent Bowen
Author's comment:
Seeking feedback on first chapter of 100,000-word fantasy novel with both line edits and broader comments welcome. Posted this . . .
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March 09, 2007 12:21 AM EST --
As i sit.
Looking outside
At myself
In the rain.
I laugh
Great big smiles.
Feigned, sneering
At the girl in the rain.
Sitting on a stone;
Her own severed head.
A hand over the hole in her heart. . . .
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March 09, 2007 12:13 AM EST --
Swim with me through this liquid universe;
The darkest corners of my mind.
I feel your touch,
I hold you,
(Don't let go).
But
You are not here.
Where are you, my love?
Hiding in an infinitely secret . . .
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April 10, 2007 10:29 PM EDT --
An original copyrighted work by Brent Bowen
Author's comment:
Seeking feedback on first chapter of 100,000-word fantasy novel with both line edits and broader comments welcome. Posted this . . .
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April 16, 2007 01:56 AM EDT --
Don't you remember?
We sat together.
Near the break of dawn,
Just one last time.
Wondering whether
Or why
We weren't dearer
To Time.
Don't you hear me?
My eyes spoke so freely . . .
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April 07, 2006 09:18 AM EDT --
Constructive criticism is the process of offering valid and well-reasoned opinions about the work of others, usually involving both positive and negative comments, in a friendly manner rather than an oppositional . . .
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April 30, 2006 12:02 AM EDT --
Constructive criticism is the process of offering valid and well-reasoned opinions about the work of others, usually involving both positive and negative comments, in a friendly manner rather than an oppositional . . .
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March 09, 2007 12:23 AM EST --
Let’s go for a walk.
Be careful! The rocks are tricky.
Don’t slip!
I’m scared. This is dangerous.
Don’t be. I’m here. Hold my hand.
Oh . . .
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January 26, 2007 10:43 AM EST --
First Chapter
Poems based on the Psalms
By Lonnie Nord
Introduction:
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I have written at least one poem based on each of the 150 psalms.
Chapter one includes an introductory poem, four poems based . . .
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